Monday, October 28, 2013

Monday Muses

Prompt: childhood

every young child's laugher or cry
overheard on slate sidewalk or
in front of a brownstone standing tall
brings me back to a time
that remains all but pushed to the back of my mind
the smell of rain in the morning
and the first time i walked to school
or sticky hands from ice cream
ducking away from the papery napkin
mom holds out to me
the dull thud of a soccer ball in the park
and the rush of the game that we won, 8-0
or the way the moon looks at midnight
and when i stayed up late
to see the stars
and then i blink
smile
and move on

3 comments:

  1. I love this poem! (Or Monday Muses, whatever you call it.) I can just see myself in the future thinking the same thing. :)

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  2. i love this! i love how you added a little bit of rhyme into it!
    and i can totally relate, i love how you included little flashes of memories!

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  3. Really great. I like how you captured the tone of a young child so perfectly.

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Books I've Read (Starting This Summer)

  • A Separate Peace, September 17 2013
  • Endymion, September 15 2013
  • Push, September 12 2013
  • the Grapes of Wrath, August 2013
  • Animal Farm by George Orwell, August 2013
  • the Great Gatsby, July 2013
  • Unbroken, July 2013
  • Lord of the Flies, July 2013
  • The chocolate war, June 2013